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         <h1>Creating Interactive 3D Web Maps with CesiumJS and 3D City Models</h1>
         <img src="img/6.JPG" alt="" style="width: 1000px;"><br>
         <h3>Step 1: Preparing 3D City Models</h3>
-        <p>In this step, we will download the 3D city models in CityGML format. Then, convert the models to 3D Tiles
-            format for optimizing the 3D web visualization. In this article, I picked the 3D city models from Den Haag area as it is a compact model. Of couse, you are freely to explore this method with any CityGML datasets.</p>
+        <p>In this step, we will download the 3D city models in CityGML format. Then, convert the models to 3D Tiles format for optimizing the 3D web visualization. In this article, I picked the 3D city models from Den Haag area as it is a compact model. Of course, you are free to explore this method with any CityGML datasets.</p>
         <li> Download the CityGML dataset from <a
                 href="https://denhaag.dataplatform.nl/#/data/36049d1a-4a0f-4c5d-8adb-21dbfb7252f9"
                 target="_blank">https://denhaag.dataplatform.nl/#/data/36049d1a-4a0f-4c5d-8adb-21dbfb7252f9</a> in the
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         </li>
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         <h3>Step 2: Preparing HTML for CesiumJS</h3>
-        In this step, we will create HTML web document containing the 3D Web Globe using CesiumJS library. You can use
-        any code Idle or editor. In this example, I named it as denHaagApp.html. You can create the document with the name you like and copy the following code. Dont forget to specify the URL on line 24 to the target Tileset.json. If you do this for the first time, you can come back after you set up the web server in step three.  
+        In this step, we will create an HTML web document containing the 3D Web Globe using CesiumJS library. You can use any code Idle or editor. In this example, I named it as denHaagApp.html. You can create the document with the name you like and copy the following code. Don't forget to specify the URL on line 24 to the target Tileset.json. If you do this for the first time, you can come back after you set up the web server in step three.
 
         <script src="https://gist.github.com/JoeThunyathep/0a97950f69952ea13759e0f245416604.js"></script>